Saturday, August 4, 2007

The man who could never say goodbye

How many tears must a man cry
before he decides to finally say goodbye?
how many times does he give up his life
when he knows there is no calm in the tide...

why dont we accept that
not'all love stories are success stories
and that a thing of beauty;
can always have uncertain glories...

but;

when was it said that if one person
moves on,the other shouldnt weep
or cant it be that the other can still
love her till he finally goes to sleep

I am no god, nor am i a saint
why ask me to move on and forget her
when you know i was, am;
and will always be in love with her....

3 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

I like reading honest poems. And this one got me somewhere. I really enjoyed it.

August 4, 2007 at 4:48 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Filled with the honest truth.. I know how you feel in this one.. Except it was me still in lve with him(an ex).. it was hard because I couldn't get over him and it tore me down.. This was well written and it held a lot of truth and meaning.. A lot of people do go through this.. Great poem.

Take care
Christina

August 4, 2007 at 4:48 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Excellent, excellent poem! So very true. I read it twice just to let it soak in.

June 9, 2008 at 6:23 PM  

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