My doors are always open.
When someone breaks your heart;
and leaves you in pain and suffering.
Come to me then my love...
My doors will always remain open to you...
Now you dont need me, now you feel relieved;
Your beauty can now capture a million hearts.
Now your beauty is beyond compare...
Even a rose withers near you...
But if ever something happens to you;
And you feel your life is not as good...
Come to me then my sweetheart;
I'll be in my knees begging you to come back.
There are no contracts in love...
I know I lost when you said you dont love me anymore...
But if you see darkness in your life and have nowhere to go;
The candles outside my house will still be shining bright...
When someone else breaks your heart ;
and leaves you in pain and suffering.
Come to me then my love;
My doors will always be open to you...
posted by Madhusudan at
7:52 AM
5 Comments:
You can feel the love that you have for this person throughout the whole poem despite the fact that they have left you. This was sad yet beautiful all at the same time. Well done and well expressed.
Take care
christina
I agree you really care for this person.
It's great writing.
I know the feelings but sooner or later gotta move on.
I would be nice to my ex iff he ever knocked on my door but when he cheated he had the last of me.
Oh I still care but after ten years, he want be back.
I wish you the best but most of all inner peace.
big huggs, prayer, peace, joy,
emy
ahhhhhh you must love this person very much, a lovely poem.
Me Im not that nice I get left for another I tell em to keep right on going! Tee hee
back to the poem, your heart was allover this page........ Lovely
Michelle
the truth of love is very clearly projected in your poem.
Beautifully expressed.
FRANCO.
Thanks for writing this.
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