One day I'll fly away...
Drifting away...no matter where you are...
Flying...hurting...smiling...wanting....
Somethings wrong...I can't go on
Someone help me fly away...
I take my time...I have everything I want
He holds your hands and I drop down
Do I want to live in this world?
I'd rather fly away...
Miles and miles...endless space.
As I take the wings to the sky...
Someone tell her what I'm going through!
And God, let me come closer to you!
Twisted dreams..tortured soul
The times I cried, keeping things inside
There's no way...I know I have to go away
One day I'll fly away...One day I'll fly away....
posted by Madhusudan at
5:48 AM
7 Comments:
Yes very emotional.....This piece, makes one feel the heart pour out, and render all broken pieces of life. I enjoyed reading this, even tho it was sad....
brew~
We shall all lift up and fly together for a day and just be free.
This touched my heart deeply, the way in which you wrote it with the ... gave it even more depth.
I felt you in this one. Those are the ones I enjoy the most, a poem that makes me feel just what you are feeling and writing. Lovely work.
Michelle
awe.. sweetie i know exactly what you're going through right now.. oh how i know...
awe.. sweetie i know exactly what you're going through right now.. oh how i know...
Nice very nice.... that helpless state of mind sounds familiar. u write really well, thanks for sharing.
awsum thoughts madhu mammaaaaa..!!!..
keep it up...
u wont let us 4get or past..lol..
fly and be free dear anna:) you will get there :) and i know you will:)
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