The girl I called Babes...
I always thought I could stand on my own;
till the day you left me all alone.
Now I can hardly make it through;
Come back, babes...All I want is you...
I'm in such pain, can't you see;
You know I love you more than me.
So I'm begging you on my knees;
come back, babes...please...
Your arms were the walls to our home;
But now the boundaries are broken.
I just cannot take this burden;
come back babes...my heart's all broken...
Life seems so cruel without you near me;
I promise to keep you as happy as you want to be...
You made me laugh, cry, love just by your sight;
Come back, babes...I just cannot cry another night...
You know you loved me before;
Can't you give it a try, once more.
I will love you, till I finally pass away;
Come back, babes...atleast for a day...
posted by Madhusudan at
11:09 AM
3 Comments:
i can almost imagine the guy i left in england saying this to me. its really horrible for you to realise what you got once it has gone.
i knew how i felt about him but he didnt value what we had, till i moved to america. now he's always telling me how he feels...
thanks for sharing the sad but beautiful poem
Gen x
i hope your special one will come back to you soon...take care..
great and very sweet write...
Not your best work. I liked it. I really did. It's simplicity is endearing but I know you can go beyond this. I've seen it in you before. But if this is your worst (not that I am saying it is) you never have anything to worry about. It's solid, emotive, and unique. Not to mention,. You are our hope. Seriously a good job. But I do expect more when I see your blog.
Good!
-SCM
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